Saturday, 26 January 2013

Film Title :  Battered and Bruised 

Strengths :

- Dialogue 
- location
- Themes 

Weaknesses : 

No accurate or solid relevance of British social realism. 
- Clothing
- Poor use of camera action , could tell the fight scene was fake due to camera position.  
- Looks a lot like a trailer instead of a film opening 

Predicted Mark : 13

Actual mark : 26


Written Syria : 

Strengths : 

-  British social realism to a small extent
- Good choice of sound , music , dialogue and voice over 
- Looks like the opening of a film 
- Good editing
- Camera use was good

Weaknesses : 

- Wouldn't appeal too many people 
- Could try to appeal to more of a British social realism theme 

Predicted mark : 36

Actual mark : 52

Cycle

Strengths : 

- British social realism 
- Good use of language and : 
- Clothing
- Mise en scene 
- Props ; Cannabis.
- looked like a movie opening 

Weaknesses 

- Continuity editing was very poor 
- Music doesn't match the genre 
- Neither is the music copyrighted 
- No use of texts


Predicted mark : 37

Actual mark : 29


Straight edge 

Strengths : 

- British social realism 
-  A lot of sightings of associations in the British society.
- Titles are dealt with appropriately 
- Sound & editing is also good and relevant 
- Good editing and camera use 
- Looked quite a lot like a film opening 

Weaknesses : 

- Didn't use editing to make meaning apparent 

Predicted mark : 41

Actual mark : 56 


Wasters


Strengths : 

- Editing such as credits 
- Sound worked well 
- Titles also worked
- Social Realism 
- Relevant use of dialogue 
- Good use of camera 

Weaknesses : 

- Was to much of a trailer 
- Quality of camera 

Predicted mark : 45 

Actual mark : 52


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